Poem -

the Gaping hole

I preferred to view the coffin
As nowt to do with us
all those people
standing black
Good god... well... what a fuss!!

I preferred to view the gaping
Hole
As just that... a hole dug...
I thought of all the work men
Trading earth for daily crusts 

I rather liked the flowers mind
I know that you did too 
Cos I heard your voice behind me
Laughing...
Who're they for??? ... and BOO!!!!

M ~

 

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Bernadete van d...

I don’t know what to say. Just incredible, I suppose. Just take a hug Marion. Maybe two? 
I am on a hugging mood right now.  

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Marion

I love your hugs 😊😊 thankyou 💕

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Shirley Harrison

This one is worth gold. So I credibly powerful and something I've experienced more than once in my own life ❤️ 🌹 

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Marion

Thanks so much love X

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Being Me

I can see so easily this scene. The power you've achieved here is unbelievable. I saw the coffin and that hole in the ground and I felt like I'd been punched. Really! I got that oomph... feeling reading this x

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