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My Mind Is Blown

I don't think I can handle the clarity 
It feels like madness 
When it all comes together 
And then it's like 
AAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGG 
And we all fall apart
It's like we get freaked out by each other 
It's too….. 
I can't find the word
Don't even know if there is one 
It's feels like…. 
Nah I just can't pin it down
It's like nothing else I've ever known
I think my mind is blown

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Being Me

Well done! I mean it!  You've managed to write a poem that seems as though it's struggling to find a word that would make everything seem sense and yet by not finding that word you've made the poem crystal clear. Hard to explain but you've reached the heart in your readers. They will know exactly what you mean because they will totally understand it. Great work x

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GirlOnABike

Thank you. I didn't do it in purpose x

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Being Me

Sometimes great things can come by accident!

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