Poem -

Filling Gaps

author
Neville

Isn’t it amazing just
how little space
we each take up here ..

Yet when gone,
the whole which is
always left behind ..

Feels impossible to
swiftly or adequately fill
except with sorrow and tears ..

 

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Loss
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Reality
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Marion

So very sadly true x

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Neville

Among many of my own personal inspirations for this little scribble, YOU & my knowing of your own my very dearest of Marion's served to feature very strongly indeed .. x

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