There is a link between this and your other poems. Both poetic but in different ways. The other poem is gentle yet deep and meaningful, rather like an acoustic, folk song. This one is deep and meaningful but belonging to the punk rock category of music. That you can write in both ways is testament to you as a poet Marion. x
Ah...how I love your insights and thank you for them most sincerely Bernie. But there is no skill to writing anger my friend, skill lies in writing beauty ...which is mostly now beyond me lol. Hugs x
Thankyou. Don't be too hard on yourself
Life has a way of rubbing away our softer edges... and let's be honest...is there anything more satisfying?? 🤩🤩 x
I can imagine that you swing that axe with such force, Marion. I am glad I am not the wood!
My comment in your previous poem serves for this one as well.
The biggest hug, B
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There is a link between this and your other poems. Both poetic but in different ways. The other poem is gentle yet deep and meaningful, rather like an acoustic, folk song. This one is deep and meaningful but belonging to the punk rock category of music. That you can write in both ways is testament to you as a poet Marion. x
Ah...how I love your insights and thank you for them most sincerely Bernie. But there is no skill to writing anger my friend, skill lies in writing beauty ...which is mostly now beyond me lol. Hugs x
Nonsense Marion. There is skill to all writing. But then again we are but the pen. Lol. Hugs. x
Bernie is right again. How did I miss all these poems?
This one left a nasty taste in my mouth .. I think because I can see myself in it so clearly .. really hard hitting .. in more ways than one .. x
Thankyou. Don't be too hard on yourself
Life has a way of rubbing away our softer edges... and let's be honest...is there anything more satisfying?? 🤩🤩 x
Cheers M .. I find a lump hammer more satisfying these days .. x
And I for one believe it! No more Mrs nice guy 🤣
I can imagine that you swing that axe with such force, Marion. I am glad I am not the wood!
My comment in your previous poem serves for this one as well.
The biggest hug, B