Poem -

I

" Ask my Dreams "

I

" I Ask my Dreams “

I ask my dreams, not to put me to sleep,
Cause i may never awake, to forgive,
But the howls in our vows, beg me to please,

To open my eyes, and see, into our dreams.

Behold, it was reality foretold,
But i denied, the simple way to find,
To open my eyes and really see, the love is truely mines,

 

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Bernie Martin

I am a fan of internal rhymes so "but the howls in our vows" and "behold, it was foretold" stand out for me. 
The poem, and I may lose my nickname here, seems to me to be about a disconnect between dreams and reality. That what the writer experiendes in dreams is not the truth of the feeling. "To open my eyes and really see" is the key phrase for me, one that is repeated in your poem so has added significance. 
Sorry if I am wrong.

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2 MUCH - 2 LOVE

Indeed, 
and always,
The Seer in Wisdom,
It is how one must see truth in reality,
and separate the two worlds,
Thank you,
Sir. Bernie Martin,
 

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2 MUCH - 2 LOVE

For that reason,
is why i have written it in suh a way,
to see,
if anyone catch the hidden,
meaning, 
and you have,
Sir, Bernie Martin, as the SEER IN WISDOM,
THANK YOU

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Bernie Martin

Cheers. I wear that name with pride. It means a lot to me and i know I will fail at some point. 
Thank you. 

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