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Shooting stars of love

Maybe our alignment is planetary,  shooting for star of love, while grounded in hypocrisy which arrows rose above. Maybe some day you'll realise not all feelings possess a person's heart, I'm looking at an empty canvas,  throwing knives instead of art , what if we weren't destined , but designed to be recluse,  has the body a sanctuary rather than a use. I've Been mortified about endings,  I want forever and a day, but rather felt as if internally,  your monstrosity had it's way, calve the apple into pieces,  sheer resemblance of a vice, I've looked into the great unknown,  and left by good advice,  sometimes love is beckoned to save the other soul, burried in the trenches of a large and gaping hole,  I'm not that saviour,  I'm not that grand or grace, but I know the angels sing, when looking at your face .

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Bernie Martin

I think your last line may well have been the starting point for your poem. That line came to you and you knew you had to write a poem that finished with it. Because it is such a beautiful last line. And I think, given what I can remember about the genesis of your poetry, I know the subject of your words. "I want forever and a day" in the middle of your poem is a significant line for me. Sorry if I am wrong. 

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Nardine Sanderson

I wrote from start to finish,  just went with my flow, I do see what you are saying  , so glad it's understood ❤️

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Bernie Martin

Cheers. Sorry I got it wrong. Sometimes I can't stop myself, well no all the time actually. ❤️

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