Poem -

Guenevere

The lady with green eyes wanders
From room to room at night
You can sometime hear her weeping
No one comes to comfort her
​​​​​AT the garden wall she stands 
Waiting for her love and King
She is lost in things she hasn't said
Recalling days spent like dust
Life was a vision of young ideals
Hoped for,  believed in, and proclaimed
When the living breathing phantom 
Appears she can awaken
To return to golden hours of love
When the minutes are so precious 
Therein

 

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Shaun Cronick

Your poem reads like an Emily Brontë descriptive poem and that takes
great skill to pull off.
A real treasure to find and read and a beautiful poem you have woven here.
Full honors to you and richly deserving.
Thank you for sharing and will follow you from now on.
All good things to you and your sublime imagination.

And welcome to Cosmo.
 

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Susan hall

Thank you for the lovely welcome and such high regard?   Thank you again I always loved Emily Bronte.
Jane Eyre, king Arthur and his Guenevere who really got a bad rap in the stories,.
Thanks again
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Susan...

Welcome to Cosmo!

​​​​​​From Fairy Tale to Real life?

What Man wants to be a King?

They should be of certain Character unless you're more into the DEI thing?

We might have to hurry and save the ones we can...

Well before we lose more in the Bikini Section for themselves...

​​​​​​We have to save the Dresses?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong Ice Queen
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Susan hall

Heavy is the crown so they say and from what I have deducted.  So is the charade they put on
Thank you for your comment and warm welcome.
,,

T

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Bernadete van d...

Welcome to Cosmo, Susan!
What a charming write, sad,
yet beautifully expressed. One 
just wants to give Guenevere a
hug.
Greetings,
Bernadete 

 

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Susan hall

Thank you  I really appreciate your read ad comment.

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Susan hall

I know that's how I feel too. :)
TThanks for reading

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Being Me

Such sadness in this poem! I get the feeling this poem is not just Guinivere but perhaps any woman who has ever been wronged or felt wronged (or, indeed, done wrong) in love. I love this poem... and welcome to Cosmo x

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Susan hall

Thank you  The story of Guenevere and Arthur has not been told yet.  She is a queen wrongly accused and a wedge between her and her true love Arthur.   My take anyway.  Thank you for reDing

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Nine Eleven

She is lost in things she hasn't said

Love this poem, thank you for sharing, welcome to cosmo. 

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