Poem -
Your Love
First the angels made a garden,
And they called it paradise.
Warmed it with the passion,
From a pair of lovers eyes.
Then they shaped the oceans,
And the sun to shine by day.
Stars to guide the wanderer's feet,
Upon their homeward way.
Then gathered sun and moonbeams,
And the beautiful opal was born.
Ice and fire living in harmony,
Their wise message never forlorn.
Then crafted a tender rose,
The flower of constancy.
Placed a lily by its side,
To teach us purity.
Then to make my life complete,
For all the rest may fade.
Heaven sent me your love,
And that's how the earth was made.
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Comments
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Jill many thanks and I hope one day perhaps you might return.
Shaun:)
put this one with some others here, I'll add "Our Anniversary" and we have our own greeting card company! lol! great write Shaun!................................Jim
Jim I'll take you up on that suggestion.
And this reply is a tad late.
My apologies for time evades me sometimes.
Shaun:)
Just BEAUTIFUL Shaun. That last stanza puts warm fuzzy goosebumps on the reader. There is so much love oozing from your wonderful writing x
Gwen I hope this late reply finds you and finds you well.
You are so sadlly missed on here.
Shaun x
Perfect beautiful poetry Shaun...,⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤗
Thank you Marion for your uplifting comment and just catching up on old poems and found this one and now replying to and apologies.
Shaun x
Wow, Shaun, an awesome and unique take on the story of creation. Flowing and elegant rhyme flows through this work, soothing and melodic, but I especially enjoyed,
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Such simplicity and effortlessness in creating a deep and relaxing picture for the audience. SUPER well written Shuan. Pinned my friend.
Max thank you for your always upbeat and welcoming comments.
I'm shamefully late here and and typing this apology to you my friend very very q u i e t l y.
See you soon Max and thanks again.👍
Shaun:)
Wow just a beautiful piece of your take of the creation on life. It's so cute, warm and loving. Amazing write. I'm so glad I got to catch up on your poems!! Reading them one after another just shows your range and wonderful writing skills!! Pxxx
Pratibha with comments like yours you can deffo visit again.
And this late reply goes to prove I'm evidently this site's late reply master.
Probably due for some glittering golden unique award by the Cosmo Team...or
told by them to f**k off !!!
Thanks again my friend and all good things to you :)
Shaun x
P.S Some things in life one should never take too seriously or
dwell on too long, for the preverbal cows to come home.
For pray tell- where's the fun in that? :)