Dream -
Enchanted Dream
Beaneath the dusk in time we danced.
Our two souls, entwined by chimes entranced.
Flying on the wing's of a golden dream.
Driven by our love, An enchanted dream. ( repeat 3xs)
Through the falling sands of time, we danced.
True loves, found treasure and its your's and it's mine, And we danced
Were sailing the sea of love, and endless dream.
Swept away, by an enchanted dream, (repeat enchanted dreams)
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I am sorry, I could not get the original video, I made to work.
But Exleast you can hear the finished song.
Exleast I hope its enchanted dreams, The computer said it was.
My speakers are broken, and I can't hear the song my self.
I Forgot to add I wrote this when I was ten, I thought I share my silly song with you.
Hey Rachel!!.........I'm a songwriter by profession.........so I'm gonna be blunt.........which is something I don't normally do on Cosmo because I NEVER comment on songs...........I'm commenting here because the vocalist on this track is VERY talented (perfect pitch is hard to find and she has it in spades)..........so I'm interested in that respect.........and whoever did the arranging is good as well..........can't say I liked the lyrics very much.......but.........I definitely think there's talent here.............well done my friend...............Love and Rockets!!...............T xo
Dumb lyrics make good songs sometimes , this one was wrote when I was ten.
Lyric is more childrens romance. not an adult.
Hi Rachel Sarai,
Congrats, your poem is now being promoted on our F.B page.
Glide on love. The Cosmofunnel team.
Thanks so much I'm glad you liked it, God bless you all at cosmofunnel!!!