Dream -
I Dream
I dream about us walking together on the beach holding hands, as the sun sets and the full moon is just sitting in the corner of the sky. I dream of us kissing on the sandy beach with our toes in the water as the waves crash against our legs, and the cold chill sends goosebumps across my body, and you cover me with your body and make me feel wonderful inside. I dream of your hands wrapped around my waist, and you holding me very close and never letting me go. I dream of you and I for the last time.
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Hi Renee, I really like this.........BUT, I think (and this is just MY opinion)............I think, instead of putting this in a paragraph form.........if you BREAK your lines........you could accent and highlight your images and words better..........please don't hate me, it's just a thought........regardless, this is a very strong write........well thought out.........and well delivered.............smiles.......tony xx
I don't hate you, I thought the same thing but I wasn't sure