Dream -
No-brainer - dream I had written down in poetic form think someone's trying to tell me about dangers of alcohol lol
Oh, no
run, run
fast, fast
this day could be my last
tiger baring his teeth
looks like me, he wants to eat
he circles me licking his lips
stops for an eternity at me hips
then he breaks into a big grin
asks would I like a tonic and gin
he says I need to be thinner
so for me a healthy dinner
i think this tiger
is a manifestation of an old trainer
in fact its a no-brainer
a dream with a warning
i found it alarming
Oh, no
run, run
fast, fast
this drink could be my last
Comments
thanks Williamsjl its how I could capture the dream glad you enjoyed them cheers Susan x
Really funny poem I think, clever how you worked out what it means!
Hi Elaine thanks now that I look at it again its either food or drink both vices of mine but he didn't seem to go near smoking but I'm of them 10 weeks tomorrow yippee glad you enjoyed thanks x
real nice poem quite funny running away  from alchol thats so positive keep it upÂ