Poem -
JESUS' PRAYER IN THE GARDEN
INĀ THEĀ GARDENĀ OFĀ GETHSEMANEĀ JESUSĀ KNELTĀ DOWNĀ ANDĀ PRAYED,
SAYINGĀ FATHERĀ IFĀ ITĀ BEĀ POSSIBLEĀ LETĀ THISĀ CUPĀ PASSĀ AWAY.
NEVERTHELESSĀ NOTĀ MYĀ OWNĀ WILLĀ BUTĀ LETĀ THINEĀ BEĀ DONE,
WE'VEĀ BEENĀ REDEEMEDĀ BYĀ THEĀ DEATHĀ OFĀ GODSĀ SON.
CHRISTĀ BOREĀ OURĀ TRANSGRESSIONSĀ JUSTĀ ASĀ ISAIAHĀ HATHĀ SAID,
THEĀ SINĀ DEBTĀ WASĀ PAIDĀ WHENĀ THEĀ BLOODĀ OFĀ OURĀ SAVIORĀ THE
LORDĀ JESUSĀ WASĀ SHED.
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Comments
hello Carl it's all well and good to be a religious man, but to get more comments on your work first you need to comment on other people's stuff, and second, try a different genre mix it up a bit like something nature or the beauty of nature (maybe love?). I know how I feel about religious poetry which to me it feels like preaching which I get plenty of when I go to my church. Your form is very good and a person can tell you are well versed and articulate. You don't have to follow my advice I just notice that others aren't commenting on your stuff and I feel kinda bad. But I hope you aren't offended by this comment I'm not trying to disrespect you in any way.
Sincerely Lisa