Poem -
moon... bang... gone...
we laughed
to
watch
the rainbows
melt
that night
as light
exploded
in
the
sky
we children
awed
and
cheering on
we laughed
and watched
the moon
bangÂ
gone
for
none of us
yet had the words
for
die
M P 8/4/23
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Comments
Ooooh — this is very well done. The first bit runs on in a fun sort of way. Its like the poem takes you by the hand and invites you to come play awhile — then, suddenly — bang! Gone! No more! Death turns up and spoils the party. Just like it does in life. Well written x
Thanks so much love...appreciated xx
You're soo good in writing poems!!! Love this soo much!! ^^
What a kind comment Sammy...appreciated...hugs x