Poem -
midnight and moon
and if you must know me then
come to my beach
walk you the shoreline with
midnight and moon
notice the stars
as they move over sky
turn into breeze
let it lift your hair high
watch as the deep waves
caress a blue sand
own you a seashell
to garnish your hand
gaze you to waters
a rowboat you'll see
adrift in its oceans
and there...
you know me.
M ~
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Absolutely beautiful. 🌹
Thankyou love...appreciated x
Marion Dear, this is simply stunning! You gave me the biggest of the smiles. Know why? Because today you’re wearing your floral dress. It makes my day. Hugs, B
Ummm...more of a floral nightshirt lol
I'm kinda down under 😁 Thankyou so much lovely lady x
Hello Marion...
I thought it was an invitation. until I realized no it's a very private Beach.....
Got me...
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
S x
So perceptive my lovely friend but I'd make exceptions for my cosmo buddy's...hugs x
this felt like a calling .. like an invitation .. a longing or plea .. the undercurrents compelling, perhaps dangerously so .. but beautiful regardless .. Neville x
You really have a gift for reading people you know... you should have been a psychiatrist or something 🤩😅
thankyou sincerely Nev x
Awesome writing that flows beautifully Marion.
Great write - Syd xo
Nice to see you back...thankyou my friend x
Perfectly penned! 'All at sea' springs to mind here! I absolutely adore this poem, Marion. It says such a lot about feeling hopelessly alone and lost without even mentioning those words. As I said, perfectly penned xx
Aw thankyou again Tina for taking the time to read my friend... I truly appreciate it. Thankyou for a beautiful comment 💞
Hi Marion,
Here is a haiku in response to your beautiful work.
Luna beckons you
Share her bounties on the beach
She will light your path
Peach and love,
Larry xx
That is beautiful Larry... you should post it x
Thank you, Marion. Posting it with you was reward enough.
Larry xxx