Poem -
hug me
hug me I say, and I'll need
nothing more
For a terror has seized meÂ
I am shaking before
the one who has made me
a consciousness here
I feel trapped in this body, this
life which I fear
and the shivers are on me
are rattling my brain
And home is displacedÂ
In this horrified pain
and I cant find the one who has
brought me to be
I am dying inside these
odd breaths
Which are me
so hug me I say and I'll ask
nothing more
just hug me and hug me and
Never let go
M ~
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Oh gosh, Marion, that was achingly beautiful. Good writing is characterized by making people feel, and I could feel every line of that. Gorgeous. Love, M.
Thanks Matthew... hugs x
Amazing writing. I am hugging you Marion. B
Thanks B... appreciated x
The most gigantic of hugs from me. ❤️Â
Thankyou love x
Hugs for you Marion, always x
Excellent poetry Marion, we all need affection, it's what keeps us human.Â
Thankyou... appreciated x
Nothing can be said Marion. I really do hope you're holding on. You and your poems mean so much to me. Hugs!
Hello Max... what a rare surprise and pleasure. Thankyou .. hugs x
Consider it done from afar .. well not so far really but incredibly truly .. x
Felt it... thankyou x
This makes me immediately think of desertion. Specifically, from one which results in lost faith — a faith which was, maybe, strong "before." Xx