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older than the sun

and people say oh look
a new dawn and it's not new is it
Can't get a thing older than the sun

Just means you travelled
Several thousand miles 

in your sleep to see
The same sun and,

even that's a big lie
You ain't moved from your bed

this reality shit
Really fucks with the head !!

M ~
 

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Rory McGinlay

We abide through don't we, by our Inti Sun god. For blessed are we who walk in the kingdom 

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Marion

Absolutely R. Blessed untill blessed no more. Thanks R x

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Marion

Ha ha... it's something Prof Brian Cox explained. He said that when you bounce a ball it takes a second to bounce back to your hand. One second. But in that second earth has moved 18 miles around the sun. What exactly is reality? The mind boggles. Thanks love X

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John Loopstra

This is fun, true it is the same sun rising, however, you could argue thst it is not the same you watching the sunrise for in your bidy thousands of cells have died and been replaced so that's another mindf&€€@🤣 but Brian Cox is fun to watch indeed
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