3 Squared
32's not one to rememberÂ
But know we lest forget
When all that's left is to surrender
Move past, look back, feel no regretÂ
Years come and go with many mistakesÂ
Too many to hold count
In this motion picture there's no re-takesÂ
Could have used an endless amount
When stripped back to beams and studsÂ
Left only is the meaning
Won't wash away with soap and sudsÂ
Will remain despite heavy cleaning
The footprints that result my movement
Should never have existedÂ
Begging for help and some improvementÂ
Lost hope when spirit was twisted
So here's to this year, the 33rd
Lets hope that it makes history
In whispers I have always heard
What lies ahead is left to mystery
      -Ashley McRitchie
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Cracking work Ashley...enjoyed the read đ¤
Here ,here ! nice one!.....................Jim.......... Wow! Ashley thank you all your support ! .............Jim
Wow amazing write! We dont get a second chance that's right, sometimes I feel like our life starts at the trunk of a tree and as we grow we have branch off to anywhere. All we can do is look to the future and put our best foot forward. We cant grow backwards after all ;) love your work, gonna have a look at some others now~ best wishes TFOTSÂ
Good work. I wonder the meaning of the title "3 Squared" ... though ;)
I know it doesn't actually make sense to other ppl because 3 to the power of 2 (squared ) equals 9. But in my head I was translating it as doubling the 3 to make it 33. I wrote that poem on my 33rd birthday.Â
Aha, that makes the perfect sense to you :) I thought was your 33rd poem posted ;)