Poem - 14 March 2018, 11:15

999

This heart still yearns for you
And all we could have been
Our love is now a crash site!
We’re dying at the scene.
The wounds are deep..near fatal.
Too numerous to attend.
We call it now....the final hour.
The bell must toll its end.

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Dean Kuch14 March 2018, 11:57

I've found that more often than not, love works out that way, Camille.
Guess what you get when you turn the numerals 999 upside down?
That pretty much says it all, huh?
Nicely done...
~Dean

Camille Lily14 March 2018, 12:03

Thank you... Ahhh.... Love... A painful contract.

Dean Kuch14 March 2018, 12:05

After two failed marriages I have little use for love as it pertains to one man and one woman, Camille.
Friendships, absolutely. But not love.
~Dean

Camille Lily14 March 2018, 12:07

Likewise... Two failed also. I never give up though... C

Dean Kuch14 March 2018, 12:10

They say there's a man for every woman and vice versa, somewhere "out there", Camille.
I truly hope someday you find your Prince Charming.
Best of luck!
~Dean

Camille Lily14 March 2018, 12:12

Thanks.. And thanks for reading C x

Tony Taylor14 March 2018, 14:31

Hey CAMILE!!.....I haven't read you in quite a while..,.,so sorry to hear of this going on in your life...... they say writing it out helps!..... I'm not sure if I believe that.... but I do think it's better than wallowing in the "could've been and what ifs'........ keep moving forward...... one never knows now does one?....... God has a plan!!...... your cyber-friend and admirer!!......T xo ???☀✴♥♥

Camille Lily14 March 2018, 14:47

Thanks Tony)