Poem -

A BETTER ME

I didn't know how it would all go...

I didn't know if I had the chance...

The chance to see if...

I could be a better me? 

I thought that I was going to live with the devil...

That's the way I was going...

Given the chance to...

Be a better me? 

I asked and...

Once I stuttered...

Hello...

It was the first step for me to know...

That was a very difficult step...

After falling down and getting up...

Again...

Again...

And again...

My friend Jesus was there to pick me up again...

Once I began the testing period which by the way...

Can be a very long test...

Maybe,  I was just a slow learner...

To be a better me...

Feels good to me...

To be...

Still a work in progress...

The tests are becoming easier...

That's how I became...

A better me...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

I Love the simplicity of this FEATHERS!!..........the sweet purity in its ideology!!.........the delivery is just plain sweet........and insightfully profound!!...........a curious write.........delivered by a wise soul!!.........ALL STARS........smiles.........T xo

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

That is very kind....

People think that I'm too nice...

People that knew me before have noticed a change in me...

I had tried to change myself...

I was not good at it at all...

That's always when I would fall...

I have reached the part of myself that I feel good...

I am better in so many different ways....

I know if this good thing can happen for me...

It can happen for anyone...

Who wants to find it...

It gets better and...

I haven't reached the end of it yet...

It is not about what I receive...

It is about a close relationship and...

How can I be of usefulness?

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs and Smiles! 

Feathers 

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Deborah Evans

Hi sparrowsong    An  honest write 
about finding yourself with the help of jesus 
I think..  Thank you for sharing
I enjoyed hugs Debs 

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sparrowsong

Hello Debs...

Yes that's really how I first found out that He has a sense of humor...

So many things that could have easily have taken me out...

To the surprise on me...

I was still here...

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

You know just what to say that brings a smile straight to the heart...

Thank you very much my friend! 

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Soul Sis...

I am so very glad that I was given the chance...

My own guilt weighed tons...

If I had to put the hardest part first it was that...

It was the the angel on one shoulder and the devil on the other all the time...

I knew that if things were going to be well with my soul...

There was only one way and I had to change my thinking and prayed alot and there was alot of waiting and studying and if there was something that I wasn't sure about I prayed about it and...

Continued studying anything pertaining to my question until I received confirmation...

Not only from what I read, but people are often used to make things clear one way or the other...

Once we realize who is who and what is what...

It gets much easier...

I am very thankful for the chance I was given...

Thank you for your comment...

Glad you enjoyed! 

Purple hugs and luv xo :) 

sparrowsong 

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