" A BURST INSIDE "
In its early burst of self expression, the world sprang
From the very same spirit as the body and mind of men
An enormous explosion contained and demanded
The truth of it all, which had landed inside
With little fanfare or pride,
True to itself alone
When unknown trumpets hailed the approach
The bee's began buzzing
A new day was coming, but so little
Did we understand
That we had no reason to plan,
And as we grew, through pivotal days
Of wintery nights in our fur covered caves
We learned, that Love was the plan
So we kept it inside, afraid of what that implied
We attempted to repeat the big burst again
But this time we compared with competitive eyes
And this time, it appeared more than wise
We had already given such mighty effort
We had already beaten the relentless tides
But the one thing we missed
Throughout all of this
Was the one true God
That graced
Our lives....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Very cool write Sir Tony. Your knowledge of human existence and their relationship with their God is commendable.. Stars my friend.. I am happy that I visited the poetry fountain today.. Be blessed..
Thanx Sir Barker!!.......... One of my things........ is Metaphysics, I write a blog on it!!........ thanks for recognizing that!!........ love to you bro!!........... later..........T xo
Creativity bursts from you, shown by this incisive work ! Your interest in our existence and what it means to think and feel what we do, the way we do, when we do, delivers some incredible poetry which is always thought provoking !
Best wishes.
:)
THANX RICHARD!!!!........I LOVE this comment my friend........ actually made me feel something like pride........... sometimes I get in little battles with my own arrogance......... that aside.........Thanx so much for this brother!!............. smiles............T xo
:) You should be proud of the writes you have done !
Your work inspires me to improve !
The very best of wishes to you.
Tony, take the comments. They are well deserved. Enjoyed each and every word.
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Thanx Grant!!........ so cool to see you on my page bro......... appreciate this!!........ love to you my friend............. smiles..........T xo
Hey T!! Yup..definitely need to get back to reading your writes, this one my friend was as spiritual and deep as they come and I love the flow, it's like your usual writes but with a flow to add icing on the cake that was good by itself. There was a lot of messages to keep me coming back to understand them all, and yes. Love was definitely the plan, love and respect to you brother!!
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Hey t you say that I am good at writing from a picture but this poem is written from a spot of heaven. This poem dus burst forth and what comes is an amazing piece of writing. Loved every line . Hugs to you your friend rock
Alright big bro, hell of write you have here! The comparrison of the big bang creating all that we know and outlr existence as well as the ideas that seem to big bang in our heads, I picked that up right away and thought that was pretty clever. The tone of how you recited this knowledge as to teach but still kept it in that form of poetry I really enjoyed that too. Like I've always said you sir have a way with words that can teach us all. I happen to like Cherie's comment too, but I say we were made in God's image so isn't it natural in a way that we want to be God's and play God, doctors do it every day as well as researchers and scientists, if not for God and his divinity who knows if men would have such a purpose as to recreate that power not to say I completely support it but I find ig fascinating. Love and Respect, as well as peace.
Hey Devon!!.........thanx a LOT my man!!........I appreciate your interpretation and the whole God thing of course, is a personal thing to each individual walking the face of this extraordinary earth............ Doctors, which I deal with personally at 6 or 7 times month DO have a God thing but in my experience it's usually me playing God for them because frankly I feel sorry for them being such idiots! (smiles).......... you're the coolest my friend !!...........thanx again for this!............. peace..............T xo
I just hope all is well and surgery a successful one in the unfortunate process of long road recovery. Iam still around but the hole of evolving and progression scream feed me Devon lol. Did you ever get around to Ant man see that theory of the distances between atoms?
NO, didn't get to the movie....... but I recently finished the book "Signature In The Cell ~ DNA and the evidence for intelligent design" so I know a bit about the theory of distances between atoms!...... but I'll be getting to the movie soon........ good to see you on the pages brother!!........ ttyl.......T xo