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a colourful life in thought

In this place of colourful trees
where bees sings

of flowering brightness on lovers lips
becomes an enchanting view of love
 
it is said that days like this 
all lonely lovers comes to life

in this forest of many colourful trees
where flowers grow like babies play

As they creep on their own and stands and falls
we were told that every flower petal grow
were angels wings that glows 
protecting babies life 

A colorful forest of carnival
a place of magical trees
it is said that it can only be found in someone Soul

But they must have love in their heart
and a golden smile
to embrace this colorful forest of life

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Tony Taylor

Sir LORRIS!!
This was truly a poetic pleasure to read my friend......It lived up to the 'Way Cool' picture you chose to bring to life here!!.....Some VERY well delivered phrasing throughout!! ~

        ~ "A colorful forest of carnival..."

I Love that phrase particularly!!......ALL STARS!!....well done my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Enjoyed the poem,enjoyed the illustration! I'm slow, just realized I could vote! lol!

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Syd

This is a really good poem Lorris. It pisses me off that I am not able to give it 5 stars. The Cosmofunnel site simply isn't working properly.

- Syd 

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