Poem -
~ A Crosswalk Daydream ~
Sometimes
If you slow your breathing
You feel your heart
Beating
A slow waltz
That sends
Your head elsewhere
To a distant
Meditating
And you forget
How
You arrived there
Suddenly
Memories
Are flooding
Your awareness
With pristine
Handfuls
Of emotions
Left dangling
In the foreground
Of these
Paintings
Like the windmills
Of your mind
While
All the while
You're daydreaming
And the man
Next to you
Says,
"Hey buddy, you alright?"
And you find
Yourself standing
In a puddle
In the rain
And
The light
Turns green
It's
Your turn
To cross
The road...
Tony Taylor
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Comments
Hi Tony...sometimes in life for whatever reason it can feel like our bodies function in a world we are not part of, we have retreated to safe places within where strangely the colours perceptions, emotions are super aware on heightened alert....so completely numb and pulsing with awareness simultaneously...again ..can relate...amazing write...hugs ?
Awww I felt raw emotion as I slowly, silently read thisun.. pinned coz heartfelt honestly there ❤️?❤️
Why thank you Miss MARION,
I think it's great how many of your comments of late are revealing a VERY introspective side of you where you're exploring human potential in maximum glide....taking into account the MANY possibilities and potentialities that make us extraordinary as human beings!......Keep it up......there is so much we have in common and your comments are a grand reminder for me that I am not alone in my extra-sensory endeavors......thanx again dear lady!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Unfortunately I have always felt things to the extreme and I think way too much...it is not always good for us Tony....pondering, thinking, feeling all the time. I love writing it helps me switch off and reading kills my thoughts...I hope to god there are books in the next reality!!..lol.. Hugs ?
Yes...I tried to remain as 'Wide Open' as possible here......thanx so much taking time with this one my friend!!.....I do so appreciate the support!!....Hugs n Smiles!!......T xo : )
I call it pondering, and it is the highest form of learning. Now I know where you get much stuff from! Enjoyed!
Lol!!..Actually, Pondering is a good way of looking at it......I appreciate your taking time with it Jim!!......Thanx so much for the kind words!!......Peace n Stuff!!......T xo : )
Tony my friend, I really do think that this is your best piece yet (and I think all your work is excellent). Pinned mate.
Nigel
My BEST? REALLY!!??...wow!!...just goes to show.....Ya NEVER know!!.....So glad you enjoyed it brother!!.....I'm gonna have to read this a few more times myself LOL!!......Thanx for this!!......Peace....T xo : )
We all seem have daydream or flush memories sometimes. Nice piece.
Thank you Sir HAN!!.....I appreciate you taking time to read and comment kind sir!!.....Stay groovy!!......peace......T xo : )