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A day

A day in a life

A day

I take my face off at the end of the day,
Not much more that words can say,
I've done all I could do today,
Was it ok?
Was it good enough?

I take my mind to some place else,
Not much I can do to help,
My thoughts are tucked away on a shelf,
Am I ok?
Am I good enough?

I know i'm not easy,
It takes a lot just to please me,

And its all fustration,
But all you need is patience.

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Yiyan Han

The 1st 2 stanzas are very interesting to read, well done. Yes, patience or time does wonder.

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The fish of the sea

Love this simple write a lot. Clear message, very clever. Best wishes to you. TFOTS

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Njukang Princeley

This is indeed a wonderful, simple piece!
Keep the ink flowing!

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