Poem -

A day

A day in a life

A day

I take my face off at the end of the day,
Not much more that words can say,
I've done all I could do today,
Was it ok?
Was it good enough?

I take my mind to some place else,
Not much I can do to help,
My thoughts are tucked away on a shelf,
Am I ok?
Am I good enough?

I know i'm not easy,
It takes a lot just to please me,

And its all fustration,
But all you need is patience.

Like 4 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Yiyan Han

The 1st 2 stanzas are very interesting to read, well done. Yes, patience or time does wonder.

Reply
author
The fish of the sea

Love this simple write a lot. Clear message, very clever. Best wishes to you. TFOTS

Reply
author
Njukang Princeley

This is indeed a wonderful, simple piece!
Keep the ink flowing!

Reply
Poem -

Attention D

ADHD

Attention D

Some may think i'm lazy,
Or ignorant or forgetful,
Some may think i'm sensitive,
Loud...

Poem -

In the Quiet

Early mornings before work

In the Quiet

In those mornings before light, its peace.
One person and a whole choice of seats,
One person...

Poem -

Listen to yourself

Acceptance

Listen to yourself

What hand will you let lead you,
To guide you through the leaps and falls?
What mind will you...

Latest poems in Drama, Epic, Freestyle, Lyric, Song

Poem -

Let my nights

"Be on flowing Tides"

Let my nights

Let my nights be upon flowing tides,
to ship my heart, to and fro in currents lights,
to...

Poem -

Round Trip

Round Trip

If it is true

that we weren't alive

until we were born

isn't it also true, when we...

Poem -

land of the free

There once was a dream called freedom.
It was born in the hearts of enslaved, down trodden men....

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com