A Fleeting Thought { say nothing at all }
There are a number of intricate possibilities invading my cranium
A moving vision of volatile, destructive, perceptions, like decaying geraniums
Like a temple garden of elusive, blooming, ideas and absurdities
Creating fluidity inside of me, like a thesaurus herding each word in me
Explosions of images and graphic new languages speaking nonsensically
But making perfection of each reflection in memories and destinies
Coming to conclusive opinions concerning atrocious abnormalities
And irreverent sermons from preachers and priests and saints
Who pray on the front steps of government holdings and restraints
Tackling the issues of future events and possible predictions
Itching to take their time losing, and scratching their convictions
On the parchment ~ of the walls,
That make quixotic
My mind,
And really,
Say Nothing At All....
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WOW Tony what a great poem realy great wow!!!!
Hey, thanx so much GRĒG!!......appreciate it!!......?......T xo
Hello Tony...
It's beyond sad that people are treated this way...
Mental illness and addiction...
Always the fault of the patient?
I don't believe that...
Great write on a very real subject...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Hey Thanx FEATHERS!!.....don't you find it interesting that the government and big business pump countless Billions of drugs and alcohol into society.....and then banish and scar those individuals who partake to the extreme?.....creating a corrupt system of greed over good!!......and leaving a sea of mentally challenged individuals!!......sucks!!...appreciate your stopping by girlfriend.......stay well my friend.....stay the course!!......hugs-n-smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
"The poet does not wait for the hero or the sage, but, as they act and think primarily, so he writes primarily what will and must be spoken..." I'll leave you to guess who wrote that. A poet who does not feel writes souless. The things that keep you awake turns to ink. Brilliantly written
Cool!! Thanx LOST!!.....I know I've heard that before......sounds like one my favs ....EMERSON!?......hey I'm just guessing.....but regardless......So glad you found this to be worthy.......not easy subject matter......stay cool brother poet!!......thanx again......T xo ?✳✴☀
Hello Tony...
No I don't find it interesting...
Twisted is more of the word I would use...
I think they're the ones who shouldn't be judge and jury...
They create the mess and we expect them to fix it?
That doesn't say much about or intelligence I have to say...
It's all about riches not the well being of the people...
I do believe we are smart enough to believe that...
We are just suckers to fall for it, and...
They know it..
If I show I don't respect the system...
Then I have made myself very clear...
:)
I can only respect that which works, not what doesn't...
Hugs...
Love and Rockets!
sparrowsong
Hey FEATHERS!!::::thanx again for this.....but like I related in the PM......it was that beast SARCASM......that drove me to say the word "interesting" at the beginning of my reply,....I mean, I totally agree......It's totally twisted......which is what I was trying to convey......thanx for this girlfriend......ttyl........smiles...T xo ?✴☀
You and me both...
?
Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Sir T.
So many thoughts running through my mind with this write..
Still trying to get my ducks in a row on this one..
But then again, thats what your poems does to this student..
Well done Sir T.
Hey Thanx Sir Barker!!...'tis truth that brought us here my friend.....I am no teacher.....I am your brother poet!!.....always will be.....thanx so much for this man.....peace.....T xo ?✳✴☀
It is like the wheels turning in my mind as I ponder life and begin my questioning words upon a page. Man T.........really wish one day we will sit down and pick each other's brains on what we choose to call real or artificial. An incredible write from an inspiring poet. Much live and peace brother.
Thanx DEVON!!.....the day IS nearing....Of that I am most sure.....you, me, Larry, Chris, Jeremy, Cherie, Purple...ALL sitting in my living room!.....miss you man.....give me a jingle some time.....STUFF (ALOT) going on......talk to ya bro!!......peace......T xo ♥
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
.
The thoughts I had, no longer be
For this world is engulfed in insanity
That which was has disappeared
And the Apocalypse, so close has neared
.
Apostates claim they know the way
Yet Armageddon threatens us each day
So my thoughts are now so quickly passed
For I fear each one could be my last
.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Hey Thanx LARRY!!.....a poem for a poem......tit for tat...... you.... my friend...... are exceptional.....I appreciate the effortlessly conveyed message ......and the thought behind it........ be well dear brother poet!!...... hugs-n-high fives ......T xo ?✴✴✳
Where is reality Tony;
it is buried deep;
where is honesty;
this is why we are seeking the parallel universe.
i am reading your writing like I am looking into
the river; with all its mud and water.
Thoughtful poet in Cosmo helps clear muddy waters. That is your great contribution.
Love from Jai:)
Hey JAI MASTERS!!..... the idea that you took the time to and consider this most inspiring reply...... sets me on a VERY groovy track for the day ahead...... fast approaching those muddy waters well armed with the positive energy you have gifted me here....... stay cool my brother from another mother!! (smiles)...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Simply a powerful reflective write not holding back in any way.
Your mind is so considered and analytical that your poetry with a message or philosophy carries more weight due to its coherent structure and approach !
Take care my friend.
:)
SIR WATERS!!.....I thank you for this most excellent review and the careful consideration inherent within...... you do me honor......I DO so look forward to your feedback brother poet...... have a blessed day...... your friend and admirer......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
:) Thank you for sharing your creativity !!
Wishing you the very best.
Take care my friend.
Hi Tony,
I really enjoyed this, It resided with me...so many just moving through life without anything to say but the same old general niceties...often people tend to revert to cliché rather that saying anything of depth for themselves...this is really thought provoking...lots to think about
Brilliant piece
Lorna
Xx
Wow! Cool! Thanx LÔRNA!!...for you to say "Lots to think about.."....... is the best kind of comment..... I can't tell you how much it means to me that you actually "considered" this write...... from one poet to another .....it is the "highest" of accolades!...... appreciate this VERY much....... hugs-n-high fives...... your friend and admirer!!....T xo ?✳✴☀♥