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as Satan watches and sizzles
and my mind seems tempted
for i have no where to go or do
but to spend these times with you
looking trying to understand the cause
days are lonely and uneasy too
but i look at you and feel there is hope
like we know something no one else do
i am wondering why am i living
for no love surrounds me nor motivates
i have open books
reading about wisdom Godly things
a way of life things ... to follow ....the way to the straight path
praying to be guided to love a better being
it is such a special quest
on occasion it feels good to myself
looking for some kind of enlightenment to fulfil the cause
but may be this can only occur with death
into the hereafter another life
how tempted it can be ...
as Satan watches and sizzles
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It sounds like Satan is medium rare or symbolic of mad because his time is short! and beware of idleness! is what I got. nice write Lorris!....................Jim
thank you Jim
I reckon we are all looking for our moral compass in this world, and faith is definitely a way to do it. Just don't get lost on the trail. No one can be perfect Lorris! Awsome poem. TFOTS
thank you Fish of the Sea
Sir LORRIS!!,
I love your style...it's very distinctive......I could pick out a Lorris poem amid a thousand others........I think we're all looking for those answers you write of here.....and perhaps you're right.....maybe they're only comprehensible after death!!.......a compelling piece dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo : )
thank you Tony very much appreciated