Poem -
A made Twist
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I'm fit dismayed the words are delayed
by the constant sway
Of the trees
As breeze soon switches
To a stop bringing back heatÂ
 To an otherwise nice day
I sit thinking of it in contrast
 to see how long it will lastÂ
Waiting for it to stay and let another breeze pass
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Comments
It's hard to portray something as intangible as the wind and make it seem as if it comes alive and has substance, Savage Skavege.
Having said that, however, you've done just that in this intriguing piece of poetry.
Very nicely penned...
~Dean Kuch
Hi Savage,
Since this is the first time I have commented on one of your works, you will see that I do them poetically, this one a Haiku.
In the soft stillness
I wait for a gentle breeze
To come and soon go
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx