A Man and A Woman ?
Are men and woman equal ?
now this is a very debatable question
My personal opinion would be no, but then again this is only my suggestion
How did I come to that conclusion ?
well I am a woman, maybe’s I am a trifle biased
Woman certainly possess more effusion, men don’t show as much emotion , so therefore, they are the dryest
Yet I cannot be a judge or jury, my point of view matters not a jot
tho I am entitled to my hypothesis, and I shall give this my best shot!!
Now where an earth was I ?
Oh yes the differential between a female and a male
Obviously men are built with more manual strength, tho if it was a strong heart then they would fail
It is the fairer sex that are the worry warts, yes sometimes we may appear to overreact, but in our defense, it is woman who have the lot to deal with!! being a Mother & a wife isn’t easy.. and that’s a fact!!
Behind every great man, there is a woman, well that is exactly what they do say
Now that above totally sums up my assessment, a man needs a woman, come what may !!
So you see a woman leads the path of any man, tho she could stand herself and yet succeed, such a powerful sex put on the globe to give new life, protect and feed
Where there is a woman, there will be organisation, she is more than capable to cope
Her femininity is her only deception, she can handle any given situation with hope
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Good advice for all women, there is more to a woman than just being a wife and mother. Woman have strived since the beginning of time, to be saw as an equal partner. Our loving ways, often coy next to our husbands and fathers, their strong stance, like a male Elk watching over his family.Â
In times of war, woman went to work for the first times in factories. Then, there came the right to vote. Now, all we need is a first woman to become president. I doubt I'll ever see that in my life time. We can hope and we can strive, to be seen with strength, effort and passion. On our individual journeys for acceptance, praise and ability.Â
Favorite line:Â
Her femininity is her only deception, she can handle any given situation with hope
The only aspect I would consider revising is to shorten some lines, pull out more details about what the woman in the story wants to achieve.Â
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's narrative in style, which told a story about equality and strength.Â
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Thank you so much Katina I appreciate your advise too ???
Yes me too Hunnybun xxx Thanks loads Cherie ??