Poem -
A METAPHYSICAL PRAYER
I survey my soul in mirrors and windows
With double sound and single delight
Like tasting sweet rain at noon
I suppose no one knows
The haunting familiarity I find
'Tis a piston that fires
That heartfelt arrow of motivation
The magnetism
That all original action exerts
What is the aboriginal self
And oh how it hurts
To don the cape for these questions
I survey my soul in mirrors and windows
Moreover, I believe in my spiritual journey
And I plead on my knees
For what I might find
I pray, let metaphysics be my guide
Help me return to the primitive morality
And purity of humanity
Allow me to implement
These truths in my life
To allow love to flow freely
Through me
And through all
That I find.....
Tony Taylor
Comments
Help me return to the primitive morality,
And purity of humanity
Wonderful my friend
Nigel
Perfect!!!.....Thanx so much Sir Nigel!!......much appreciated my friend!!.......Kings to you!!.....T xo 👍👍✴❤✴👏👏😊
Hi Love.....This is a perfect example in writing of your own personal journey to discover yourself through the mysteries of the metaphysical....a prayer of seeking to find truth and motivation of the spirit of God that leads to living life in love's influence...that is certainly what motivates me....beyond the mind's understanding...a real spirit that spurs us all to investigate and draw to something so inexplicable but more real than what we experience in this physical world. To understand who we are, I think we have to ask questions and look beyond the mirror of what we see in life...I like the meditative and pleading feel of this out of sincere curiosity and interest in the spiritual and metaphysical. You keep cranking out fine representations of who you are in your writing, and showing how polished you have become as a poet as well. Love, Hugs, n Kisses xox Your C
WOW CHERIE!!.....that is such an amazingly accurate comment on this write.....sometimes I forget how well you know me......because if you didn't you wouldn't be able to be so insightful......I love it.....I love you too sweetheart!!.....thanx so much for this!!......kisses......T xo 👄👄👄✴✴👏👏👏👏👏👏👏❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Now that’s poetry! 👍🏼
VERY cool!!......Thanx JG!!.......high fives!.........T xo 👍👍✴❤❤✴👏👏😊
👏👏👏👏 absolutely beautiful Tony, such deep meaning! This piece is unreal, very very touching brother! There is a place for me to return also, you nailed this Tony! 👏👏👏👏😊☮💓
A Place to return!!??......thanx so much bro!!......always a pleasure to hear from you!........T xo ....kisses ❤😊❤😊
Hi Tony
I've no words again for metaphysical prayer..so touching and moving brilliant stuff really my friend..✌✌✌✌👊👊👊👊👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏
Keith......you're such a cool guy.....thanx for being awesome bro!!......peace n stuff!!.......T xo 👍👍✴❤❤✴👏👏😊💞
Tony you make immortality sound like the place to be, so soothing, removing the negative tones in our life and enjoy and evolution we would never experience but within these words....I love this poem!!
Faith xo
thank you FAITH!!.... What a wonderful comment...... so glad you enjoyed it dear poet sister!!....... always a pleasure to hear from you......hugs-n-smiles!!......T xo 👍👍✴❤✴😊
Hello Tony...
I thought the rain tasted sweeter at 4...
Maybe, it just takes awhile around the mountains...
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Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
LOL!!...... that mountain fresh rain is always sweet😊........thanx for the smiles my friend....... hope you're having a great day!!...... love to you and yours FEATHERS!!........T xo 👍👍✴❤❤✴😊
hi tony .. i love the ending here
Allow me to implement
These truths in my life
To allow love to flow freely
Through me
And through all
That I find.....
reflecting on your soul through mirrors and windows... looking at your soul reflected back at you and asking questions, observing .....
great poem which i very much enjoyed
Like tasting sweet rain at noon''
you make your reflection sound like a sweet and pleasant experience.. tasting sweet rain at noon, beautiful line
YAY!!..... so happy to see you on the pages CHARLOTTE!!..... and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.... you pointed out my favorite line!!...... hope all is well with you and yours!!.......Hugs-n-Smiles!!......T xo 👍👍✴❤❤✴😊
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry :)x
No worries WENDY!!.....Thanx for this girlfriend!!..... always a pleasure!!..... smiles....T xo ❤
Yes Tony felt like jumping on the Yellow Submarine on this one and visit the Gurus of India with the Fab 4. Incredible write bro
You remember that do ya!!?.... didn't they hang out with the Baghwan Shree Rajneesh or someone like that?.... the 60's were a VERY interesting time!!.....thanx for this bro!!..... stay groovy!!.... smiles....T xo ❤👍✴
Absolutely beautiful Tony!!!
I don't know what more to say. So perfect smooth of flow that it seems to literally stream steadily as it pulls you into the writers perspective! Thank You for this one Tony! Well Done!
Thank you TWILLA!!!....always a pleasure to hear from you !!.......much appreciated my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T❤👍
Thank you for allowing us to venture into your world of unknowns, this was very much engaging.
Best regards,
Mai B