Poem -

A nEw wORld

there were explosions
the stars blew apart
the world disappeared

there was only stark
the void was impossible
the heavens fell away
time no longer mattered
there was no more night or
day
there was no more of anything
that mattered anymore
except the graveyard, now a
universe
which contained the only door
left
open

M P 1/5/20

 

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Gwendoline

Feels like we will be lost in the void of nothingness. Can feel like that in life too ❤️ 

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Marion

This is about life Gwen...for me ...this is exactly how it is. For you too I suspect...lots of hugs ❤️❤️

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Gwendoline

It’s hard isn’t it 😞 Hugs ❤️

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Marion

❤️❤️❤️😘

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Tony Taylor

Such is the path/outlook of the lost, lonely, and hopeless......But.....the poet knows that all things are cyclical......and this too shall pass.....and live a stark existence somewhere deep in the mind of the sufferer......where one day the light will shine once again......for this I pray!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Marion

I would love to find solace in your words Tony but I now know my light will never burn brightly again...I will live in the half light. The loss of your child alters something within, breaks things forever. Thankyou for your kindness lovely man 🤗🤗
 

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Marion

Thankyou Jill...hugs 💕

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Chris Bond

A super write , Well done Marion on a great poem , X

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