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A Niche In The Nook Noticed

A Niche In The Nook Noticed

It's viable how reliable my vital role is a viral droll
Like I don't know 
Right I was told
The dice I've rolled puts my life on hold 
But I bite my lip
And shed my skin
Take medicine
And hope I never feel dead again !

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Marion Price

Really like this and you have communicated a great truth about depression in so few lines...the reliability of the highs and lows and how it stops time! Nice write 🌹

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Johnathan Kavanaugh

Thanks glad you like... ive been messed up since a kid im nearly 30 now i should have a book! But i mustered up a few lines to define how i feel most days

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Marion Price

I write a fair bit on darkness and depression also Jonathan, IV struggled most of my life with it and have a loved one struggling with MH issues. I have found writing so therapeutic, I hope you do too 😊🌹

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Johnathan Kavanaugh

I guess if everything were perfect wed be in heaven glad to know of heaven at least brings hope... Writing does help very much

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Marion Price

We have to know the dark to appreciate the light, there would be no ups if there were first not downs etc etc etc etc but seriously, sometimes we are the richer for it, there is something to be said for feeling extremes. Keep writing, keep healing😊😊

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