A Queen and her Prince ❤️💙
She stood out like a movie star and she felt just like a queen...standing in her beautiful ballgown which was an awesome aquamarine...Her dancing partner held the hand of the prettiest girl he had ever seen...with her long flowing chestnut locks and those stunny eyes of emerald green...
Oh yes she was a stunner... this was definately true...although she lacked in self confidence so she didn’t have a clue...until that evening when she was sat on a riverbank admiring the view...a passerby came up to her from out of the blue...He mounted off his white steed and stood by her side...and as he looked right into her eyes she wanted to hide...Then he told her “I have travelled everywhere far and wide looking for someone like you to be my bride”
She fluttered her eyelids and wanted to cry...and bowed her head as she gave out a sigh...”Oh sir you are so extremely kind and such a nicer compliment would be difficult to find... but at this moment my heart belongs to another and she is replaceable my dear devoted Mother”...The prince smiled and he shook his head and studied her reaction as he calmly said...“ Oh fine maiden I shall not fear your Mother...nor will I ever come between any other lover...but heed my words for my heart is true when I say these words that I love you”
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A stunning write Jill and that gown is so.similar in colour and style to the one my daughter wore to her prom years...and years ago...lol..pinned 💕
Awww isnt it so pretty Wow your daughter must have looked a milion dollars ❤️💕❤️
A Lovely poetic narrative.....you definitely are a wonderful storyteller dear poet sister......and you shine here.....just waiting for the day when you decide to format these wonderful writes so its easier for the reader to feel the amazing rhythm and timing of your poetic magic!!......ALL STARS!!....Love your stuff my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Awwww Ty xx I read then thru n sound ok n try to flow them but guessin dont spend long on each lol xx
A handsome stranger on a white steed declaring his love...isnt this what fairytales are made of? Lovely write, Jill. Enjoyed the read x
Awwww thankd so much luv xxxx ❤️💕❤️
Awww iv just changed layout trying to take advice coz I want people to enjoy reading my stuff .. Yes luv I was thinking lol of you as I wrote this before ❤️💕❤️
Okay Jill first off aqua marine is my fav color, so you got my attention! then I love the poem! but there you go leaving the head off again! lol! I'm left imaging what she looks like.lol! Guess that is good I just put my wife's face there! Just having fun! lol! great write!.........................Jim
Teehee aww i love that you put your wifes face onnit Jim that is awesome of you ❤️💙❤️