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A Series of Thoughts

A Series of Thoughts

Like a florin pinned
And
Smiling down
Through
Random clouds
Silent
Though on reflection
Maybe
More like some
Rogue
Half-crown, he thought

 

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Gwendoline

You clever clogs you...this is such a wonderful poetic expression of how the mind can reflect on a chain of thoughts, effectively change our thinking on something. This is why your pen is mighty my friend. For skills like this don’t come easily to all. But you seem to flow with a wonderful mojo and poetic expression, that paints in the readers mind such a visual journey on any subject or emotion you feel the need to tap into
wonderful 
Gwen x 

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Neville

I am more chuffed than a Kernow Chough :) x

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Marion

Maybe a reflection on someone else's thoughts...I know a few like this...often,...myself included. Thoughtful write with a slightly bewildered overtone...bewilderment...the curse one carries from birth to death. Good write Neville x

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Neville

this could quite easily be precisely what you have tentatively proposed .. thank you Marion 

Your mate, Me :)

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