Poem -
A single tear
A single tender
timid tear
trickling
down my pail
pain painted face .
Leading it’s
pleading sulking serenade .
Which reflects
back to me
a bitter
burning memory .
Of when our
love like a dove
flew into the
saddened sea
of fantasy.
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Comments
Love the leading line so very much!
WOW!! EDWARD!!....Fantastic use of alliteration here!!.....which in turn has made for some VERY compelling phrasing and a kind of romantic longing that I have not seen/read here on Cosmo for quite some time!!.....The heartbreak is so well conveyed that I wish I could give this piece more than just 5 Stars!!.......Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....Bravo dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
PS. great choice with the Sinatra tune!!