Poem -

A SONG

He
Is 
A
Song

Yep...
Golden notes and all that
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

But more so than this
He sounds sweet on our breath
And ever... we sing him
He can never die death

We 
Sing
Him
With
Smile

We sing him with tears

We 
Sing
All
The
While

The
Notes
Joy Love and Fears

With trembling soprano
With boom to the base
With bittersweet alto

With
The
Pride

On
Our
Face

M P.8/6/22

 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

I would like to think this is about singing to God but im not sure. 
Its a superb lovely poem wow! Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too 

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Marion

No...it's about my son whom god has stolen...Guess god isn't so popular with lots of us. Thanks so much for taking the time, your comment and feedback..hugs x

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Aw dear im so sorry about your son, but we will all end up there with God sooner or later, maybe its a better place. Take care and hope you feel better. 

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Neville

I like your style & can sense your pain .. this one's to be read, innit .. over and over again x

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Marion

You are very kind and a gentleman to boot and...I.thank you x

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Neville

I am absolutely not, but I do deserve a boot every now & then :) x

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Being Me

Just read this 3 times! Beautiful, sad, painful, loving and awesome all rolled into one x

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Marion

Thanks for your kindness Tina...sincerely meant lovely lady xx

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