Poem -
A Tear Says It All
One stray tear drop is all it took,
Making me see your heart was an open book.
You had never before felt like this,
One kiss telling the truth and fulfilling your wish.
A blessed moment changing everything,
Giving your existence purpose and true meaning.
Your sacred dream to finally come true ,
As love stirred emotion in you so completely new.
Your realizing we were meant to be,
Our souls connecting in an embrace to last eternity.
Never again would life be the same,
A timeless bond forged on that night any would claim.
One tear is what needed to fall,
To put everything in true perspective once and for all.
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Wow Richard, sweet,emotional and romantic write. Great write. Cheers.
Hug ! Just reminiscing about the time my love and I met !
:) Warmest wishes to you.
I think I believe in soul mates..an good for those that find them, dunno if it's a reflection on myself or not but this isn't the kinda poem I believe I'll ever write
May you both last forever :)
You can not say this is a poem you will never write ! I would have once thought like you but then I met my love and the world changed forever ! Emotion and desires of the heart are not under your control at all times. The unexpected may occur !!! :)
My love was so emotional after we met knowing she wanted to be with me ! A pure true connection was made that lasts to this day. This appeared out of nowhere putting my life back on track after some turbulent times !!! :)
Thank you for wishing us well.
Take care. :)
A tear along a face says it all, a furtive tear speaks of sadness and pain, reunions, bachelor parties or a memory that we hurt, the tears are timeless and we should never be ashamed of crying, the tears are not a symptom of weakness, if natural and human emotions of sadness and joy as sorrow. What would happen in the world if it lost the feeling of sorrow and tears? That the world would be even worse than it is.
Several years on forums Hispanic some mindless mocked Rafael Correa by shed tears in public, by crying they accused him of being a little man, but crying is not of men nor women but of people who suffer and who aren't afraid to show his wounds.
I agree with all the opinions, the composition is very beautiful, is full of romance and emotion, a poem that is perfectly made it conveys to readers the emotions of the author.
A greeting to all.
A tear is an indicator a person is emotional. Whether the tear be produced by sorrow, trauma or happiness a tear is the bodies natural release mechanism when everything around or what you perceive is getting too much !
Those that cry and show emotion in general are just 'open' souls who more readily express themselves. They can be the stronger for this not the weaker !!! :) After the release of crying or shedding a tear most feel better and more capable of managing or coping with the given situation.
Best wishes to you ! :)
You are epic in your words of capturing the connection of you and love and sharing it with the reader to bring that fulfillment to our hearts that this pure and rare relationship exists, very well done in your expressive exploits good sir, I felt that link grow stronger with that one happy tear. Love and Peace to you.
So pleased you enjoyed my work !
I put a lot of effort into getting this one how I wanted it !
Best wishes to you ! :)
Has reason Devon, something so complicated just a decade, today practiced as normal, the conversation between an author and readers benefit both and enriches the writing, but returning to the poem:
"You can cry of joy, anger, sadness and pain, there are real tears and feigned tears, but in the Act of crying, although sources are the eyes a wounded heart generates tears"
A greeting.
Great quote. Thank you Lucas for all that you add to my works with your insight !
Take care my friend ! :)
Hello Richard...
Very Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs :)
sparrowsong
Hug ! :)
The pleasure is mine, from that I read José Cadalso Marruecas charts my passion for cultivating the epistolary genre had been able to be reality until the emergence of the Web, apart from learning a language to share opinions with the authors of English-speaking makes me feel the passion being writing letters with poets and artists of COSMOFUNNEL.
A hug.
:) A hug to you ! Wishing you the very best Lucas !
Hey Richard finding your true soul mate is special gift that engulfs the fiber of your being . Such a wonderful feeling to know that your hearts beat as one . A very beautifullly done write of love .pinned all stars .your Friend rock
So pleased you enjoyed this !
Take care my friend ! :)