Poem -
a thought becomes
a simple word ..love
dont we all wish
dont we all think
of a pleasurable moment
that was never ending
to look within the eyes
of dreams
of lust
of Green
to hold as you did once
to the beginning again
when romance were a candle light
and chocolate filling hearts
a touch of moonlight
on a walk of sand as
footprints backwash to the sea
she looked up at you
as your voice stumbles
for a word
a murmer
exhaling stops ...to only a smile
as she tighten the hold to your hands
and then
and then ...the waves crushes to your knees....
and the thought becomes a thought ...
as eyes on eyes so filled
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Comments
smooth talker velvety spoken your love is very lucky you old romantic.
A high compliment just so you know.
Thank you Liliana
Gosh Lorris your words really paint the scene beautifully. I loved the way this flowed too. It reads like silk off the tongue. Which helps set the mood and motion of this piece perfectly. The last line finishes this poem in the exact way the entirety of its intent gives throughout. The eyes absorbing into each other to soak in a moment that will forever be imprinted on the heart and soul. Just a wonderful poem on the power and effect of love
Thanks so much for sharing
Gwen x
Thank you Gwen