Poem -

a thought becomes

a simple word ..love

a thought becomes

dont we all wish 
dont we all think
of a pleasurable moment
that was never ending

to look within the eyes
of dreams
of lust
of Green

to hold as you did once 
to the beginning again
when romance were a candle light
and chocolate filling hearts

a touch of moonlight
on a walk of sand as
footprints backwash to the sea

she looked up at you
as your voice stumbles
for a word 
a murmer 
exhaling stops ...to only a smile 

as she tighten the hold to your hands
and then 
and then ...the waves crushes to your knees....
and the thought becomes a thought ...
as eyes on eyes so filled

 

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Liliana of the ...

 smooth talker velvety spoken your love is very lucky you old romantic.
A high compliment just so you know. 

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Gwendoline

Gosh Lorris your words really paint the scene beautifully. I loved the way this flowed too. It reads like silk off the tongue. Which helps set the mood and motion of this piece perfectly. The last line finishes this poem in the exact way the entirety of its intent gives throughout. The eyes absorbing into each other to soak in a moment that will forever be imprinted on the heart and soul. Just a wonderful poem on the power and effect of love 
Thanks so much for sharing 
Gwen x

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