Poem -

One Thread Freyed

One Thread Freyed

see us stand
yes, see us stand
stick figures in 
changed blue lands
holding hands with no more time
entwined this way
yes...
still
entwined

one thread freyed and
subtly changed,
a composition rearranged
in moving shifts
of forward, wind
but still entwined
yes...
still entwined

in rippling ways on grappling
days
perception shift's but essence
stays
entwined my dears
entwined,
always entwined

M P 2/12/21
 

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Being Me

In reality we are all one big messy ball of entwining and we spew out more and more thread. I love the thinking behind this poem x

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Marion

Thanks Tina...plenty of unravelling thread here on this page spewing out lol...ah...it's so lovely your back...hugs Xx

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RG

"one thread unfreyed yet
subtly changed,
a composition rearranged
in moving shifts
of forward, wind
but still entwined
yes...
still entwined"

This spoke to me Marion as I feel the validity behind these words, losing my Grandfather ( my father figure ) was so hard but realizing forever the connection and roots planted were going to keep us connected regardless of the " subtly changed " 
Beautifully heartfelt write ~Rob 

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Marion

Thanks Rob...sincerely. I veer between embracing the ever after and smashing gods face in. Not good...shit!!...seriously though it means a lot you found a little meaning here ..hugs x

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RG

I found a HUGE meaning , thank you for finding the strength to pen this ! Xoxo Rob 

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Tony Taylor

Indeed.....one thread can unravel much.....but NEVER change the fact that we are ALL ever-connected....and the effects we have on one another are permanently stored in the "Fabric Of Time"......at least that is what came to my mind as I read this MARION!!......ALL STARS!!......beautifully penned.....rhythmically elegant!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

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Marion

So true Tony...I like that...'the fabric of time' ....hugs x

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Gwendoline

Gorgeous Marion, no matter what ever happens, that bond can never be fully broken. Even when we can no longer physically see them, we feel their presence and love that forever resides inside our heart and soul. We will carry that with us no matter where we end up in time and space 

Loved this a true heart felt spill xx 

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Marion

❤❤❤

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Neville

I'm afraid, I'm a bit a freyed too, if you know what I mean ...

and whilst these days she sees nothing but ugly .. that does not stop her beautiful mind ..x

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Marion

Ah...we can be subtly changed whilst remaining unfreyed Neville, changed forever but ultimately...intact. Personally I'm a lot frayed though so you have my sympathy. Thanks my friend x

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