Poem -
A violet rose, or crimson
Lyrical obserdity
A violet rose, or crimson , your complexion never pales
to blush at obsene language, such gesture never fails
In the intrepid noun of paged covers titled wrong, found solace in the lyrical obserdity of a fragile song
If only the words were of a romance
And falling rushed the garden leaves
I'd find Within the music of sound
my own breaths and how to preive
For all the happy endings those eternal and forever shown
A rose of violet or crimson in that garden I had grown
Seek to pick one's beauty, and make it's love my own.
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The composition brims with tenderness, love and understanding, perhaps that is why the purple rose of Nardine's garden, despite the distance, perfumes all the readers of the poem the heart with its fragrance.
A hug, and congratulations on the composition.
Aww thank you sweetheart
much love always ❤
It is always a pleasure to meet your poems, reading them, apart from the delight, you learn.
Another hug!!
" It, is in the bitch. " Rather than the " lap dog " or " Reservoir Dog " where you find that which matters most. Do not " pander " to the creatures of the night, but, to the " Wolf Of Wall Street " howling at the moon. There, lies the Where-wolf " syndrome " rather than " there-there-puppy " manifestations to test explorations into " SOMETHING ENTIRELY DIFFERENT " ( beyond " The Full Monty " ).
You have learnt what you need. And, HUNT FOR IT. Right ? Time and time again ? To be more.
Keep it up. The " poetry " I mean. Do not be distracted from " task " or " Mask " to further your " Golden Shot " at the title. You stretch the boundaries nicely. But, then again, why would you not ? Being " talent " !
However too modest to accept your position. What, it does for you. And, for others ? WHAT " PERSONAL " CHARACTER, DISPLAYED.
I, think....you give, in the " right way " to bolster credibility of the medium. THANKS. :) :) X x X