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A VISIT TO THE HYPNOTIST

A VISIT TO THE HYPNOTIST

Look into my eyes the hypnotist said to me  
I did as I was told but could no longer see  
He had me in a trance and under his spell 
I didn't know what I was saying and was feeling unwell  

It was important I remembered that fateful day
This as far as I knew was the only way  
The hypnotist took notes on the information I was giving 
Then with a click I was back to the living 

So that fateful day was written on the hypnotist's report  
I made sure I paid him for fear of getting caught
When I got the report I couldn't believe my eyes
Robbing a bank at gunpoint was probably not wise  

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Edward Williams

Lol that was a cool surprise ending did not see it coming

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Audrey youde

You brighten up my day ,,love the twist at the end x

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