Poem -
Ace
It's hard for me to keep a smile on my face
Tripping over the steps of this staircase
Can't escape this absurde visual place
Starting to Embrasse the blank spaceÂ
Impossible to keep up with your pace
Not enough space in my data base
I have freedom when I manipulate
Can't get rid of my memory trace
I need to get to a higher place
Not part of the human race
Don't ask me to embraceÂ
It takes so much graceÂ
Stuck in this deep dark space
I'm a mental case
In a hiding place
I'm Not an ace
Been Defaced
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Comments
Hey REBECCA!!
I can feel the sense of depression and a 'lone wolf' sense of separateness that these words are attempting to convey!!.....I Like the fine sense of rhythm and timing that you deliver this VERY compelling write with!!..... It almost reads like a 'rap song' might be delivered!!...... but mostly I just REALLY like the wonderful sense of creativity this has!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister!!...... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴❤
Thank you so much it means the world to me that my poems are met with such kind wordsÂ