Poem -
Acid Reign
Like 4 Pin it 4Summer's humid
Sunkissed warm glow
Crystal clearÂ
Bright blue skies
Sunlight leakingÂ
Like a child peakingÂ
Through fingers
Crossed in front of eyes...
ÂDecades of slow decay
Sodden soil
Rotting leaf litterÂ
Saturated skin
Segmented insectsÂ
Yellow clay...Ideas fall like rain
Cascading down
The window paneÂ
Trying to catch themÂ
On a serpentine tongueÂ
A one sided battleÂ
Cannot be won
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Comments
Glad I clicked on this one, what magic you bring Syd. I know mental blanks can be hard! so I wish you all the inspiration you could imagine! I know that's a contradictory statement, but you get what I mean XD
Hi Max,
Thank you. I always appreciate your kind comments...and yes I do know what you mean. Hope you're keeping well.
Take care - SydÂ
This was so beautiful to read..
like a swan dancing on undisturbed waters..
thanks for sharing Acid Reign.
liked.. Pinned!
Thank you so much for your kind comment Wilford "like a swan dancing on undisturbed waters"...I love that!.
Thanks again for your positive comment and pin.
Take care - SydÂ
Hello Syd,Â
I remember peeking through my fingers at the sunlight. I get from this piece a sense of rushing time. Something out of our hands and yet we try so hard to grasp at life. To make it feel fulfilled. And yet we watch it slip through our fingers so swiftly. I loved this read. It also had a good fluid motion about it. Which gives the reader that sense of movement, like with passing time.Â
Really good writeÂ
Gwen xÂ
Hi Gwen,
You're really good at leaving constructive positive feedback. Something I'm not so good at myself...I seem to lack the vocabulary. But anyway...I'm really glad you enjoyed this one. I really tried to paint a picture with my words and as you will probably know.. that is easier said than done.
Thanks again - SydÂ