Poem -
Adrift
Eyes glazed
shipwrecked
by a pink fizzing tide
absolution of worries...
Endorphins collide
Neck craned back
silently studying contours
of a spiralled artex ceiling
Neatly pressed pills
beginning to digest
will I ever tire of this
blissful abundant feeling?
Incarcerated by the current
drifting like a drunken log
barely buoyant, saturated
marooned in pea soup fog
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Comments
Fabulous write Syd...very descriptive, carries the reader away. It sounds like you are talking about drugs or booze here but I know you are talking about the ecstacy of chocolate!! ?...hugs ?
Thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback Marion. Yes...unfortunately you were right on your first educated guess. I'm definitely not looking for any sympathy though. I just write about whatever inspires me. You kind of get what you're given with my poems lol.
Take careΒ - Syd xoΒ
Then they are all the more brilliant for that Syd,Β just be yourself Syd, everybody else is taken. I read that somewhere thought it was brilliant, neither black nor white inspires artists...it is all the myriad colours in between my friend ?
I totally agree Marion. Thank you for your kind comments and support.
- Syd xoΒ
You described this feeling so well that, yes, I was there in that pink fizzy tide feeling soooo relaxed! I know this feeling very well... although not through alcohol or pills or anything else like that. Excellent writing!Β
Hi Being Me, thank you so much for your kind feedback. This write was inspired by pink gin & tonic and medication. Hence the pink fizzing tide.
Take careΒ - Syd xoΒ
I am trying myself some of that then...??
Ok Tina...I'm.intrigued...not booze, drugs or pills...sex then?? Spill!! ...??
No ....not even sex (well occasionally ??) no. You can get into this state by ...it is difficult to describe ... but let's just call it a form of meditation I guess ? x
Ha ha...ok...???
Dude, You are SOOO gifted at expressing yourself in the moment.....it's what sets your stuff apart.....honestly descriptive.....and a VERY fine vocabulary makes yours a mighty pen brother!!.....Floatin' on the juices of the moment!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!....well done brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
Thank you so much for your kind comment Tony. I usually find it quite easy to write about myself. I wish I could change some of my old habits though. I'm always trying to improve my vocabulary, so I appreciate you mentioning that also.
Take careΒ - Syd xoΒ
If this is about addiction then I sincerely empathise. If it's merely a description of some leisurely relaxation then enjoy!!
A bit of what you fancy does you good, so the saying goes...Β
An enjoyable read ?
Thank you for kind comment Pen, I don't believe we've been acquainted here on Cosmofunnel. The write is a bit of both, I'm not a full blown alcoholic and I should definitely drink less. I also enjoy it.
Apologies for the late reply - SydΒ
Awesome write Syd
Thanks you so much Lisa.
- Syd xoΒ
"marooned in pea soup fog" - Never thought the use of "pea soup" this way. Congrats.
Thank you for your kind comment Yiyan. I'm glad you liked my choice of words and imagery.
Take careΒ - SydΒ