Poem -

Aegean Sea - experimental

Aegean Sea - experimental

I dove 
down 
down 
down  
into 
The blue 
Mother father 
Like frogs into a pond 
I dove 
down 
down 
down 
Into the blue 
Until I saw myself amongst 
The blue, 
the blue Aegean sea 
Whispy white crests blur depth  
Unperturbed 
I dove 
down 
down 
down
Into the blue,
I lay on the ocean floor  
Mother father 
I lay next to you, at rest 
I dove 
down  
down 
down 
Pale face choked
I swear I saw my life flash
Flash before my eyes 
As I dove 
Down  
down 
down 
into the blue 
The blue Aegean 
The wonderfully blue Aegean sea   
Sweet mercy 
every fish ought to know that god exists 
Every child needs to know 
Mother father  
I swear I saw their spirits 
As I dove  
Down 
down 
down 
into the  Blue
the blue Aegean sea  
God asks no more than a prayer 
My head itches with pain 
My heart aches with the stains of the earth 
the dusty earth 
And to escape I dove 
I dove down 
I dove 
down 
down 
down 
Into the blue 
The blue Aegean sea

In the darkness 
When the moon is full 
(father moon, mother light) 
the current still 
In the shadow of the sea 
Mother father  
Their spirits came to me 
Beckoning, 
I dove
I dove down 
Down 
Down  
Down 
Into the blue 
The wonderfully blue Aegean sea 

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Michael

Very nice as usual Jai.  Nice melody of rhythm.  Nice job and well down on the metering.

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Jai Masters

thank you Michael 

I've never has feedback on the popoem which I 

write 5 years ago; this is very helpful to me 

and I am grateful for your time and ththoughts 

kind rgs Jai :)

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Jai Masters,

In the darkness 
When the moon is full 
(father moon, mother light) 
the current still 
In the shadow of the sea 

The most loved lines from your verse. This is a full length lyric like a poetic movie. Congrats

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Jai Masters

Thank you Williams
This poem is my life so
I am grateful for your commentary
Kind rgs Jai :)

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Tina Moore

wow! love this jai ,really drawn into the deep blue of that ocean/sea . felt the pain and the love as going down drew me. amazing!!      tinax

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Jai Masters

Tina brings a smile to Jai
:) thanks for reading !

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Jai Masters,

Congrats on your winning nomination dear Jai,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author
Jai Masters

that was a surprise I thought this 

poem was a bit unusual 

not structured like a sonnet 

just a long piece of string 

thank you for informing me 

William;) Luv from Jai 

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