Poem -
Aeons Past
Far flung the galaxies,
In vistas sublime!
Dangle like frosted
fruit,
On a dark matter vine.
Each with an iris,
As the pupil draws light.
Peers away from Osiris,
And the depths of the night.
Gravity recurring law,
Light; the mercy of love.
The music manifest I saw,
Restoring order above.
As I gaze at the structure;
Of the universe unknown,
I ponder aeons past,
Place the had been sown.
seeds
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Comments
I like the artistic liberties you made here Jim
take care
greg
The change in subject? your comment means a lot ! thank you GREG for your support!...........................................................................Jim
Thank you Cherie! love to ponder the stars! all the best! happy new year!
Thank You Hj! happy new year!
Clever artistry here Jim lad I is impressed so gave u an ouchy pinny 🤣❤️💙❤️
Thank you Jill ! just be careful where you pin it! lol! happy new year! you are very kind!...........................................................lad
Haha must I b careful teehee aww u r welcome lad 🤣❤️💙❤️
Galaxies and the universe. Seems very magical to me. Fascinating read Jim! Your friend Max
Thank you Max! I know your in this galaxy! XD!
"Fruit on a dark matter vine"
Wonderful write Jim!
🤎 SHALOM
Thank you al ! and peace back to you! Thank you so much for your support........Jim
This is a lovely poem Jim. It is deep and it delves into the stars and the night. Some fantastic lines...if I have to choose any favourite lines (which it is hard to do cos they are all so good) then this really jumped out at me:
Awesome writing! 👏👏👏 x
Thank you! awesome gives me encouragement! I am thankful for the feedback! means more than you know........Jim
Hi Jim,
nice write, resonates with me.
JP
Thanks John!
Oh so true
Thank you Liliana!
This one is stunning. And many galaxies look like cells as well, and, in other words, could the whole universe be like a human body?
Thank you .Yiyan! hope you mean the poem lol! the pic is gleaned from Pixabay
what wonderful poem
i to love looking at
the universe
and wonder in
and if there is black hole
that you can go thought
but Einston found wormholes
and as the years went on
scientist found you can go
thought it but couldnt came
back there still working on it
today
Thank You Greg!
More than just simply good poem Jim, simply heavenly.
A poem to knock a reader's socks off.
Your poem leaps off the page.
Great writing.
Take care and thanks for sharing.
Thank you for going back to read!