Poem - 27 July 2018, 19:55

Ageing

Time ticks by, body, slowly dies.
Skin crinkles, penis shrinkles.
Bellys flop, boobs drop.
Hair turns gray, teeth decay.
Life comes to its end, long gone our last friend.
Rest in peace, our final release.
Return to Earth, new life give birth.

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Melodrama Tragedy Tragicomedy

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Randy Johnson27 July 2018, 20:02

Very true and well written.

Jonathan Marsh27 July 2018, 20:09

Thank you Randy

Poetrypoet27 July 2018, 20:28

Depressingly true, makes me feel sad about lonely old people.
Great poem

Jonathan Marsh27 July 2018, 20:32

Thank you poetrypoet

Angel27 July 2018, 21:10

A lot of truth in this poem angel

Jonathan Marsh28 July 2018, 10:08

Thanks Angel

Sellamuthu Kandasamy28 July 2018, 10:08

very Frank

Jonathan Marsh28 July 2018, 10:18

Thanks

Tony Taylor28 July 2018, 12:25

Hey JONATHAN!! Wow!!...what a great debut' piece!!.....there's humor and profound truth in this well delivered piece of poetic prose!!......Life itself conveyed VERY powerfully and succinctly!!.....ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet brother!!....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴??✴❤?

Jonathan Marsh28 July 2018, 13:33

Thank you so much!
this is actually my first poem I think I’ve ever written apart from in primary school lol
came to me in the shower after a long day at work looking after old people