Poem - 15 June 2014, 22:14 air. Nardine Sanderson Births first breath, into life mimics violence, Crying as lungs fill with air, fragile lungs fight for air, And take thy last breath, In silence aids death Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 556 Rating: Total votes: 0 Tags: Birth Breath Death Poetry Genre: Freestyle 4 comments
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI15 June 2014, 22:38 Though short verse, strong in meanings Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
Ravindra Kumar16 June 2014, 03:10 Peculiar rhetorical expression,..highly impressive...thank you,...lovely. Reply
Nardine Sanderson16 June 2014, 03:14 Thank you ravindra Kumar, I'm ever so pleased with all three of your expressions of interest in this write, as i was a bit sceptic in sharing this one, anyway i appreciate it immensely xx love to you All xx Reply
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Though short verse, strong in meanings
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir williamsji xx love to you xx
Peculiar rhetorical expression,..highly impressive...thank you,...lovely.
Thank you ravindra Kumar, I'm ever so pleased with all three of your expressions of interest in this write, as i was a bit sceptic in sharing this one, anyway i appreciate it immensely xx love to you All xx