"ALARIANI " ~ Warrior Of The Realm
A hushed, tight, wave of panic struck her as she strode
Down the main passage, she could feel their eyes through the walls
Shouts reached her from a far off gallery
Two parties had faced off in the Great Hall
Alariani was here, to make sense of it all
And, to fulfill what had been foretold
From around a bend, she surprised them all
Cleaved clean off, the very first head
With royalties blade she brought a halt
Between two parties gathered to defend
She ended it by leaving one dead
Her anger blazed up in her as she surged forward
Intimidating the others, feigning a strike against them
Highlighting the would be folly of daring to react at all
She would make it perfectly clear, "This!! Is where it ends!!
Upon each brother here, we ALL depend!!"
The guards lifted the head and body
Alariani, wiped off and quickly re-sheathed her sword
She explained, in a furious display
That the truth in the realm worked only one way
FROM THE KING'S LIPS TO HERS
And that is how it would remain
She mastered herself, forced a smile,
Then hastened away
She saw now that the realm was at a flashpoint
A flashpoint of crisis, so she hurried her steady gait
Then burst unannounced into her Father's chambers
To strongly state, "The time has come Your Majesty!"
Grimly, he ignored her, for the mounting fear
Which cut at his awareness, his sense of fairness
He turned to his daughter and begged, "ALARIANI,
are you willing to die today!?"
Without hesitation she was gone
As she strode along passages and down stairways
She could hear her Great Army in the World Courtyard
They were ALL chanting her name
As she exploded through door and into daylight
Her soldiers exploded in their own way
"ALARIANI!" , "ALARIANI!" , warrior of the realm
Had but three words to say,
"KILL....THEM....ALL!!"
There would be no survivors
This day...
Tony Taylor
From: The Women Warrior Series (a work in progress)
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YES!!!.... I'm so glad you liked the re-write!! I felt RĒALLY happy with this when I was finished and that doesn't happen too often....... I've got 17 more to do the re-writes on and then I'll be close to my goal of 25.....,and nearing the ability to publish "The Women Warrior Series" ......I Love the way you see my stuff...... you're such an inspiration to me sweetheart!!.......Thanx SO much!!...... big kisses!!.....T xoxo ?✳✴☀♥♥
Hi Tony, excellent narrative prose, full of vivid imagery ### all 5 senses used ## I enjoy reading this kind of women warrior write, a symbol of feminist empowerment, women who help defend the city from attack like John of arc, Guinevere from King Arthur ##
I can't wait to read your poem ##
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hugs, peace and cheers
Leah
So cool of you LEAH!!!.....LOVE the enthusiasm about this..... because there will be 25 of these .....presented as a coffee table book..... an ongoing project of mine!!....thanx so much for all of the support sweetie!!......hugs-n-smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Are you going to publish them on Cosmo or sell them?? I'm interested to have a copy of them all ##
17 are done and ready to be edited.....I have two artists already engaged to do the artwork.... they both have been doing artwork for Marvel & DC comics.... it will independently published as a coffee table book...,,. as soon as it's completed I'll be sure to get you a copy..... I have several projects going right now..... so I doubt this will be completed before the Christmas holidays..... but again,.....I won't forget you..... Promise...... stay groovy girlfriend.....?✳✴♥☀.....T xo
Domineering write of real endeavour which is full to the brim with gusto and spirit.
Wonderful.
Thanks for sharing your craft ! Take care my friend.
:)
THanx So much SIR WATERS!!..... another amazingly supportive comment.....I DO appreciate it my friend....... stay groovy......ttyl......T xo ?✳✴☀
Hi Tony Love it! brilliant writing that keeps you
engrossed from beginning to end
It brings to mind for me Joan of Arc
your Alariani sure is a strong inspiring woman
with kick ass fight in her
A fantastic read my friend
Love n hugs Debs xo
YAY!!.... awesome DEBS!!... so glad you caught this!!... and it found that reaction from you!!....I know how busy you've been of late..... and I honestly couldn't think of a better person to find feedback on this from...... you know my stuff better than any one on this site (aside from Cherie)...... so it does me great honor that you found time for this particular favorite of my own!!...... Love you sweetie...... Big, huge, Smiles!!......T xo ?☀✴✳♥