Poem - 09 December 2013, 11:58 All wrong/ Reflection of thoughts Jessica Darvill Left but not left Right but not right Round in circles Spun round and round Sat by the crossroads, No clear path should be made, Lost forever Soon together Maybe. Never. Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 373 Rating: Total votes: 0 Tags: Forever Hopeless Reflection Poetry Genre: Tragedy 2 comments
Jessica Darvill13 December 2013, 14:14 Would like some comments constructive critisism?? New to this...:) Reply
Tina Moore13 December 2013, 14:18 good start jessica !  little more  but good start  .  welcome and write more  im tina x Reply
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Would like some comments constructive critisism?? New to this...:)
good start jessica !  little more  but good start  .  welcome and write more  im tina x