Poem -

ALL YOU REALLY SEE IS YOU

The familiarity of what you feel surrounds you...

It's in every place you look...

In everything you feel...

In every tear you cry...

With every heartbreak that tares you apart...

In every night you feel all alone...

In everyone you say they just don't care...

In every time you were hurt...

In every day you just want to quit...

Look around you and maybe, all you really see is you...

May the road lead you to recovery...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Tina...

Sometimes, comments leave us speechless...

This is one of those times for me...

If there was a way to pin comments I would definitely add this one...

Thank you for your very beautiful comment and support!

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Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

Perhaps I have not been in a such thickness of trees that blocked the Forest...

Maybe, everything just looked like a Forest to me...

I really don't know...

Exploring since I was a kid I guess not looking for something, but always finding something...

Being different than most girls and they had more to smile about and yet, it just seemed like I was just happier anyway...

So I was glad to be different...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend!

Love n Hugs

sparrowsong

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lodigiana

The rejection and loneliness in this poem is palpable...It beautifully encapsulates the subject showing the reader how hurt a soul can becomeĀ  but also that there is maybe some hope in recovery- A great read- thank you for sharing - Hugs xxx
Lodigiana

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

Very wise words...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your very sweet and kind comment!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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