Poem - 18 August 2014, 21:10 alone Nardine Sanderson alone in depths, of twilights twist beneath the tears of sorrows mist a broken heart she does bare vanished now without a care time escapes just standing there alone in shadows forgotten despair. Like 0 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 617 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Heartache Mist Sorrow Tears Poetry Genre: Freestyle 10 comments
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI18 August 2014, 22:09 Dear Nardine. A sorrowful write, Thanks for sharing .My applause, My vote a broken heart she does bare vanished now without a care time escapes just standing there alone in shadows forgotten despair. Love, regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
Nardine Sanderson18 August 2014, 23:01 Thank you dear friend sir Williamsji, it is a sorrowful picture, but still very beautiful, love to you nardine xx Reply
Jonathan Carter18 August 2014, 23:09 Quick and piercing! Well done, my heart sank a little when I read this one. Reply
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI18 August 2014, 23:34 The picture depicts sorrow, I love this image, very suitable dear Poetess Nardine, Congrats Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
BLOSSOM19 August 2014, 00:14 A perfect image for a charming sad write. The rhyme and flow was spot on Nardine. I felt for this beautifully pained figure:) Great job:) Reply
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Dear Nardine.
A sorrowful write, Thanks for sharing .My applause, My vote
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you dear friend sir Williamsji, it is a sorrowful picture, but still very beautiful, love to you nardine xx
Nice write
Thank you madison law xoxo
Quick and piercing! Well done, my heart sank a little when I read this one.
Thank you Jonathan carter xoxo
The picture depicts sorrow, I love this image, very suitable dear Poetess Nardine, Congrats
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir, much love xoxo
A perfect image for a charming sad write. The rhyme and flow was spot on Nardine. I felt for this beautifully pained figure:) Great job:)
Thanks Rach xoxo